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Heyo! So i was searching for critiqueables (or however you spell it) and i stumbled upon your artwork. So, here are a couple of things ...


In General the drawing looks nice, although i have to mention some flaws. But first let me adress the good points: -The Pose is interes...

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Heyo!
So i was searching for critiqueables (or however you spell it) and i stumbled upon your artwork.
So, here are a couple of things i noticed, let's start of with the good points.

The overal picture blends really well together and it is quite dynamic, that is very good.
The colors you chose are pretty neat 2, although personally i'd have changed the hair color a little to a bit darker more warmish one.
The animals are instantly recognisable and the background is fairly well made (although there a little too many stars imo, but that's whatever you prefer)

I also have some points that could use a little attention.
So, first of all, the face.
I know it's very hard to get used to but make sure to practise the sizes of the nose mouth and eyes, try using an example, since you learn the most from doing that.

To be a little more precise, let me start with the eyes, they are a little big, remeber that the eyes start at the sides of the nose, and make sure not to make them too big.
Then the nos, you are on the right path, but, remeber that the bottom side of the nose isn't one piece (but i think you kinda knew that lol).
And, when you are looking at someone's face from the front, never draw the lines from the eyebrows down to the tip of the nose, it will make it look weird for a bit. Especially dont do that when drawing women.
About the mouth, put it a little higher, because now there is almost no chin, and the little U shape under the nose should be touching the upper lip.

I got a bit more tips, the hair is nice but the little piece of hair next to the 3rd eye shouldnt be there, if you want to make a little piece of hair make sure to have it go along with the overal shape, so in this case make it go to the left and a bit longer.

But overal you did a good job!
Hope i helped ;)
In General the drawing looks nice, although i have to mention some flaws.
But first let me adress the good points:

-The Pose is interesting and looks pretty interesting
-A lot of detail and effort went into it and that shows ^^
-You can instantly see what character this represents and that's great

But, i have some things to say:

First of all, you can clearly see you had some trouble lining the entire drawing, my advice is to be a bit looser with your lines, you learn a lot more from sketching 2.
Also, despite the nice arm coming towards the front, the drawing lacks a bit of perspective, for example, the headpiece Mercy is wearing doesnt fit properly, nor do her wings. Best way to fix this is to pick draw some lines horisontally when you are sketching so you can line up the wings etc.

I know im giving alot of tips but in my opinion thats the thing you learn the most from, becuase with "omfg its so good" you rly don't learn anything.

Also, make sure the hair is one piece, its clearly stacked up right now, just dont draw the lines all the way, if you do that the problem is fixed.
And, make sure NEVER to draw the bottom of the nose with one line, it are speperate holes, try using an example for the nose, it really helps.
I got a couple more things about the face, make sure to make the outlines of the face clear, as in, where her jaw is, where her chin is, it will make everything look a lot more solid. Make sure the eyes aren't like those egyptian eyes, you really need to step of that style, it looks pretty weird. Try using examples for that 2.

But, despite all my tips, i think you did a really good job, and i hope you learn something from what i said.

Nice going! :D
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The size of some things might look a bit off but that is because of my camera lol
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Thank ya kindly for the watch, man! Also, heppy belated burthdey. :B :party:
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AlexJustOut Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2016  Student Digital Artist
Haha thanks dude ;)
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Anytime, man.
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Happy b-day! :)
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Thanks dude! Didn't expect that :)
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You're welcome! ;)
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Thank you very much for adding me to your watch-list! ^__^
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